earlier wip https://www.ptweb.me/play/WbUu/JQTK85XSkLAOJaz4fgpSjSViyNzYobgEbNTq
original comment below:

not much progress since last time, a bit more detuning in part b
also richer instrumentatino in repeat of part c
also raised church bell from last time, agree it's less muddy (thanks ppl for suggesting!)
last time: https://www.ptweb.me/play/tBeY/8CHXKtaQrZbJz1TBegcvh3BX42Y0qUuA8y3I

goals:
denser chords (more sus / maj2 intervals?)
will add one more section after that'll hopefully be more intense and can transtion back to part a and include monolith theme. some thing modulation
how to make sections less formulaic?