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Thorn in My Heart

trying something new...! this was my botb summer chip submission https://battleofthebits.org/arena/Entry/Thorn+in+My+Heart/54775/

i don't usually do vocals but i felt inspired to try it after a pxtone server conversation about rapping. i also used some samples that were fairly different than my usual fare

the writing could be a lot more cohesive and frankly it needs a second verse (+chorus) but there were 20 minutes left on the clock when i submitted this lol, time was a bit too short. it took a while to write stuff that flowed in exactly the right ways, i would need even more time to a) improve it and b) write another verse. i might come back to it since it's kind of a mess but a nice idea; we'll see

Aug. 7, 2022, 9:59 p.m.
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Aug. 13, 2022, 8:33 a.m.

Your singing voice reminds me of Brian David Gilbert! Very fun and unusual song from PxTone! I love when people push the metaphorical (and literal) envelope with PxTone stuff.

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Aug. 12, 2022, 2:27 a.m.

I love dami's esthetic designing :-)

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Aug. 9, 2022, 4:09 p.m.

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She waits for you in a suburban L.A. home
with a yard and a middle-class bent with its blinders on
hopelessly focused on an alternate dimension where everything's alright
In through the kitchen of an unacquainted home
with a poultry predilection and appliances of chrome
Pay your respects to the glass on the table
as the threads of the cosmos begin to unravel
She waits for you to take her to the moon and the stars
so with haste you touch the distortion
No traces of life in the room as it crumbles
revealing the moon and the stars

Don't touch the thorns around my heart
They're forever here to stay
Always been there from the start
Won't be different today

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Aug. 8, 2022, 8:11 p.m.

Lyrics? :3